Here's another drawing from me, but this time its not coloured and its luigi's head I think i messed up his hat a but it could be fixed.. Anyways tell me how i did on this drawing!
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Luigi Head
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Getting better at this!
Wow, iHack4Life...you sure are improving in terms of your drawing skills. Nice sketch and nice pose for Luigi himself (at least his head).
Aside from the pupils (need to be a bit bigger) and something about that right ear that looks off, it's a well drawn sketch.
8.5/10
(Don't be too encouraged! )
Aside from the pupils (need to be a bit bigger) and something about that right ear that looks off, it's a well drawn sketch.
8.5/10
(Don't be too encouraged! )
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As Evo said before me, the pose is just fine; you have drawn him symmetrically correct, and that's always a plus. His left ear (to your right) seems bigger than the right ear (to your left). It's not proportional and doesn't match up if you draw a straight line between them. His mouth is also a little too close to his mustache, so lowering it where you first had it was right, just a bit. It may seem a little off to you, but comparing to the actual Luigi drawing, it's close. On his hat, the white part needs to be outstretched some more and the L needs to be drawn larger. Other than that, I don't see anything else too bad with it.
Looks good at face value, don't get me wrong; I can't even draw Luigi. XD So, there's a bit of constructive critique for you. n_n
Looks good at face value, don't get me wrong; I can't even draw Luigi. XD So, there's a bit of constructive critique for you. n_n
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thanks alot guys, always putting me down lol, well ty for all the tips, even though i have errors everywhere!!
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^Hey, failure is the stepping stone to success and you're getting there.
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lol, yea yea. Sheesh kids these days and their logic
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Hey, failure is apart of learning. You learn the more you practice. I'm not trying to put you down; I was only trying to help. That's what constructive criticism is; it's criticism that is also helpful.
See, if I didn't say where you needed to correct where you messed up at, it could have been flaming against you, and THAT'S bad. Flaming = not good. Constructive criticism = always good.
See, if I didn't say where you needed to correct where you messed up at, it could have been flaming against you, and THAT'S bad. Flaming = not good. Constructive criticism = always good.
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