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    Post by Mudkip Tue Jan 22, 2013 7:29 pm

    WARNINGS:
    There may be swearing so don't read it if you can't handle it, romance and violence.

    Chapter 1:

    Ugh I am so tired from throwing that party yesterday. There were like fifty peoples coming and making noises however, I am surprised that there weren't any single neighbour that weren't at the party awake. Anyways, I am Pete, I am ten years old since yesterday hence the party. I am about to get my pokemon soon, I am going to choose a pokemon which would travel across the land of Hoenn! My older brother is somewhere I do not know however, I can hope that my older is safe. Some guy was staring at my window, what a creepy old pedophile.

    *Knock knock* Oh no, who is it? I hope it's not that guy! I opened the door anyway and saw Professor. Oak OMG I am so happy to meet the famous Professor by the face. I hear that he was working with the other professors to develop a machine! “Why hello there Peterson Wellingbottoms nice to meet you." Professor Oak gave me an warm hearted greeting although I was embarrassed of that name, Why did my parents have to come up with stupid names WHY!? I couldn't blame them since it was named after my great grandfather who adopted the great professor, saved Hoenn and likes myths. “Hello Professor Oak, can I have my starter please?” I asked as nicely as possibly, he simply grinned at me and gave me a Pokèball with an encyclopedia of some sort, it looked all robot style oh I have got to ask the Professor this. "Does this have Gangnam Style music?" He nodded and also explained that this encyclopedia was called a PokèDex, doesn't the 'Pokè' sound familiar? I guess they couldn't come up with an original idea. He then explained to me that I can get numerous of pokèmons into the PokèDex and he told me that this is a NationalDex, talk about a surprise. I sended out the starter after Professor Oak told me the basics so I just saw a pokèmon who was starring at me quietly, it was...

    To be continued...

    Authors Note: I added suspense for the readers at the end Razz
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    Post by Will Tue Jan 22, 2013 10:32 pm

    Nice. Way to add humor!
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    Post by Evolution Master Wed Jan 23, 2013 2:04 am

    Lol, nice job RaikouFan. Also indeed there was suspense in the end.

    I wonder if it's something obvious...probably not. Razz
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    Post by Mudkip Wed Jan 23, 2013 1:51 pm

    @Will, indeed I was thank you.

    @Evolution Master, You'll find out in this chapter, here's a clue it's

    Chapter 2: Journey Begins


    Oh hi guys! Well the Pokemon revealed seems to be an... "... Abra ..." The Abra said timidly using Teleport and hiding behind me. That Abra sure is shy, hopefully that pedophile outside didn't scare it or I'll beat the **** out of him if he did. "Here is your thirty Pokeballs, go and discover many pokemons roaming in Hoenn and become an Champion!" Professor Oak smiled brightly enough to make me feel brave. I went outside, went inside Professor Birch's lab and said goodbye to him and left towards Route 101. I saw some couple of Poochyena's, Wurmple's and Zigzagoon. I then went towards Oldale Town since those pokemons were as weak as an Sunkern. "Ho ho ho merry Christmas!" DUDE, THIS IS THE WRONG SEASON!!! I thought to myself but didn't want to be rude about it so I left the idiotic man to say ho ho ho or whatever he wants to say. Anyways, I went inside the Pokemon Center THUUUUUUUUUD someone just bumped into me. "What the **** is wrong with you bumping into me?!" Some guy shouted at me, that man's breath smells like some rotten cheese and cigarette. That guy must clearly have anger issues to shouting in my face I swear I wanted to push that guy to the muds were he can melt. I went to Nurse Joy, at least she was nice enough not to shout at my face and her breath smelled like strawberry sweets, ahhhhh that smells nice. "Thank you for your time, please come to the pokemon center if you want reservation or if you want you and your pokemons healed." I nodded politely, smiled and went to Route 103 to train. I saw a Ralts looking hurt and injured, it looked like it was attacked. I bet it was that bastard that had that rotten breath, I am going to return it to the pokemon center.

    I went to the Pokemon Center and returned it to Nurse Joy. "Thank you for rescuing the Ralts, indeed it was injured and the trainer was an horrible man who hates everyone and was tryinbg to flirt with me." She tried her best to smile, I don't blame her because Nurse Joy's are meant to smile so I left.

    Hello human, I am Ralts and I am thankful for rescuing me. You may catch me as you wish, you seem an capable trainer who I can trust. Woah this Ralts looks like it has been through a lot but I'll do my be- WAIT DID IT JUST TALK THROUGH MY HEAD?! THIS INSANE MAN! Although I think that Ralts is a Psychic type so I'm not too surprised just a bit. "Abra... Ab" How comes Abra couldn't speak and it just came out of nowhere just shocking... I chucked a Pokeball at its head, hopefully it didn't hurt but I'm sure it'll handle the Pokeball. After I captured Ralts, I decided to name it Tell and my Abra IQ. I also checked their PokeDex's, Abra the Psi Pokemon, Using its psychic power is such a strain on its brain that it needs to sleep for 18 hours a day. Wow, no wonder it closes its eyes all the time, I rarely see it open its eyes anyways onto Ralts. Ralts, The Feeling Pokemon, If its horns capture the warm feelings of people or Pokémon, its body warms up slightly. Wowowowow no wonder it was pleased of me, I can't wait till I travel with these two or maybe even more. Now I need to check their abilities... Mmhuh, yeah, alright... OMG, I HAVE DREAM WORLD ABILITIES, YES YES YES!!! I began jumping happily across the Route and back to Oldale Town.

    To be Continued... Next time, will Pete go to Route 102? Who will be there? Read on...

    Author's Note:
    yes I added Dream World abilities for each of them both, I wanted them both to be unique also their Dream World Abilites are: IQ- Magic Guard, Tell- Telepathy.
    Yes there was swearing so if you're gonna flame me or anything, read the title and the first post about the warnings okay? Thanks!
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    Post by Evolution Master Wed Jan 23, 2013 7:12 pm

    Wow, really great chapter Raikou. Smile You really put a lot of work into this chapter, and it really seems fleshed out.

    Abra eh? Didn't expect that, but I guess the unexpected just makes the story more interesting. XD Really nice development Raikou, can't wait to read your next chapter. Smile
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    Post by Will Wed Jan 23, 2013 10:43 pm

    Going good so far. I"m not that experianced of a pokemon player but I got some of the game related jokes. Again very funny.

    Also I looked up a pic of abra, and he looks cool. Is he in the unova regin too? If so where is he?
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    Post by Mudkip Thu Jan 24, 2013 5:36 pm

    @Evolution Master, thank you and yes it'll make the reader shocked. Say if some guy was travelling with a nice villain but he betrayed you and was a villain then you'll feel shocked right? Same with villains, they may rescue you Razz

    @Will, Oh Abra is from Kanto but I think it would have to be breeded by the final evolution Alakazam which can be obtained through a trade.

    Chapter 3: Psycho Kid

    "GET AWAY FROM ME AAAAAAAAAAAH!!!" Okay how the hell did this happen?! Lemme tell you what happoened after I left Route 103... Alright so I went to Oldale Town to sleep there because it was getting dark however, I dropped my sandwich. What does that have to do anything you ask? I DON'T HAVE PEANUT BUTTER!!! Yes that's a huge deal. I went to check in, the Nurse told me to go to Room 13. I know what you guys are thinking, that is a bad luck number and indeed you guys are right. "Ab." My Abra said casually just Teleporting to Room 12, that lucky son of a Alakazam! Master, I am going with Abra. You must take care of yourself. THAT was messed up, I'm fucking serious man. Now I'm not gonna have anyone with me at Room 13 but I did. *Gulps* "Ooooooooh hi there hehe wanna go to the movies to see a romantic movie?" THAT WAS IT! I said a simple no, do you guys know what she did? She just got angry and started tearing things apart because I rejected her, that was messed up seriously. I just ran from that room as soon as I could. I picked my pokemon from Room 12 and they were safe inside the Pokeballs while I had to run from an psychotic girl. Now... "GET AWAY FROM ME AAAAAAAAAAA!!!" I shouted, Nurse Joy just looked at me blindly. I just ran out of the PokeCenter, ran to Route 102 which was just at the left and BUMP. "..." ??? said, I don't even know what it is and it just got a fire and chucked it at the girl and she shouted loudly and ran straight to Oldale Town.

    That guy was so weird and creepy but he saved my ass from that psycho girl so yeah... As I took a step, some young trainer came and just walked into me without saying excuse me or sorry, that's messed up! "Hey kid, leeeeeet's battle!" What the **** man, I am like five years older than me but nevermind I'll beat the crap out of that kid. "Zigzagoon, I choose YOU!" Zigzagoon looked drunk and hiccuped as he entered to the battle field. Okay is it me or has that Zigzagoon been going on beer? Anyways gotta send out Abra! "Abra use Teleport!" Abra nodded silently and Teleported until the Zigzagoon was exhausted and fainted because it was drunk and exhausted. The funniest thing happened was tht the Zigzagoon just threw up at it's triner, I just rolled on the floor laughing so much that wild pokemon came out of their hiding spots and just laughed with me, the trainer gave me like $400, SWEET! So I walk and passed the Youngster, some lassie and a Bug catcher and made it to where the Gym Leader is which is at Petalburg, pretty cool place if you ask me but busy.

    Someone came out with a pokemon with the Gym Leader...

    To be continued... Who is the Gym leader?
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    Post by Evolution Master Sat Jan 26, 2013 3:27 am

    Haha, Abra seems like an interesting Pokemon. Razz

    Didn't expect all this RF, but since it's your fic this was to be expected (loving it XD). Hm, could it be Norman???
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    Post by Will Sat Jan 26, 2013 4:10 am

    Again nice. Never thought of drunk pokemons. I"lltryto keep reading these. Keep it up there good.
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    Post by Mudkip Sat Jan 26, 2013 8:32 am

    @EM, nope it's not Norman.
    @Will, Haha thanks and drunk pokemons are usually weaker pokemons that have been spoilt to death.

    Chapter 4: Dad?!

    Okay so I saw the Gym Leader and he was my dad. I thought my dad was some badass champion not some gym leader who could be beaten dang. "Hello young trainer, I am Brendan however I cannot battle you because you look like some beginner." I was pissed when my dad called me a newb of some sort and even more pissed that he didn't even recognize me, I like my grandfather Norman way better but my dad couldn't even recognize me. Anyways, he asked me to go catch him a Ralts I just said screw you old man and just walked away from my dad since he didn't even miss me since like five years ago. So I just went to Route 104 which is at my left since that guy doesn't even recognize me so I left him being forever alone with his gym trainers.I just trained my pokemons against a couple of weaker pokemons although the Taillows and Marills gave me an tough challenge. After training my pokemon I decided to rest at Petalburg City for the night and have an one on one battle to how him that I'm not weak and definitely not an beginner! The nurse of this town was nice and the Pokemon Center smelled like mixed up fruit which was a compliment really. I then saw some beginner trainers and some trainers with four badges, wow they must be tougher than me. So I just woke up at the next day with my pokemons, we were having our brain exercise and went to the gym. "Oh it's you, sorry but you cannot challenge me until you have four badges although we could have an friendly battle one vs. one since you keep on complaining to me about." He just sended out his Sceptile, this guy looks like he is going to dominate me but I'm not prepared to give up so I sended out IQ. He laughed at my IQ and he said that his Sceptile will rough IQ up. The battle began, I told Abra to use Psychic and he did it and it did a few damage. My dads Sceptile just gone rough on me and his Sceptile used Leaf Blade direct hit but Abra just Teleported away and used Psychic from behind and just beat the crap outta Sceptile surprisingly WOW. My Abra just Teleported towards his Pokeball, my dad told me to give me a rematch and he said, "Please train up... son!" HE CALLED ME SON WOO HE RECOGNIZED ME FINALLY!

    I then went to Route 104 training I was training some more. After I done some training, I went to the forest Petalburg Forest; that forest gave me the creeps so I just continued and saw this guy, "Hey you, I am gonna beat you with my six Wurmples!" I just proven that guy wrong by beating his Wurmples with Feel and just carried on through the forest and beating those Wurmples and progressing through the forest. I was just going to step out until someone shouted, "Heeeeeeeelp me, this psycho pokemon is chasing me. Who will safe me?!" I just sighed and saw the psycho pokemon which was just a Skitty, I was just laughing like seriously. "Oh my gosh, you're scared of that?" I literally just laughed like some monkey screeching but the Skitty justy used Hyper Beam wow I think I know what he means. So I just battled Skitty, Ralts used Confusion imbolizing the Skitty to the ground, that guy used an Eevee defeating the Skitty. "Thank you for helping me, I'm Vara and I am going to become the best MonoNormal trainer!" I just nodded in agreement. Vara asked me if we could travel, I just nodded so we just went outside the forest and onto Route 104 which was linked to the other Route 104 below.

    To be continued...

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