My Friends and Tales in GamerzUniverse.

PREVIEW
I sighed as my friends left to school without me.Oh well.I thought. I grabbed my things and raced out the door not bothering to say bye to my older brother.I heard him snore loudly and I rolled my eyes. I quickly made it outside and was halfway to my school when I heard a annoying beeping sound.BEEP BEEP BEPEPEP!I opened my eyes,relived to find out that was a dream. A nightmare really.I shut off my alarm clock and stumbled into the bathroom.I glanced at my reflection. Normal as always. A tanned colour skin and pitch black hair.I checked my phone and there were text messages from PokeZone, DahiveVanityFangirl and more

Man this is really good.I can't wait to see the first chapter!

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CHAPTER 1- School and roommates
I jumped out of bed and did a little dance. I was super excited for my first day at Gamerz School! No more math! No more science! Nope, this school was all about fun! My brother was also excited as he was going to the same school. I raced into the bathroom, brushed my teeth, took a shower and ran to my room. I locked my door and decided to wear this http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=64155080. I smiled at my reflection. "BREAKFAST!" My mom yelled. I ran down the stairs and sat at the breakfast table for one last time for a long time. Gamerz School is a boarding school so I won't be coming back for a long time. My dad brought my brother and my suitcases down and groaned. I laughed."Dad, you need to get in better shape!" I said. "Shhh!" He laughed.I quickly finished a breakfast of orange juice and waffles with whip cream and strawberries on them and waited for my brother. He takes SO long to get ready and he's a boy! He finally came downstairs wearing this http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=64157329 as I promised my parents to call every night. It was soon time to go. My brother didn't eat. We hugged our parents and grabbed our suitcases as a limo appeared. It said GAMERZ SCHOOL- BEST SCHOOL IN THE UNIVERSE! In bold on it. The limo looked like this inside http://www.joselinlinder.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/hummer-limo-interior-b.jpeg. The driver put our bags somewhere and smiled at us. I soon drifted off wondering how the school would look like. "WAKE UP!" My brother yelled and I was up. We walked inside and I gasped. (The bags are already in rooms) This place was AWESOME! They had every single arcade game! They also had prizes and things like that. I suddenly bumped into a girl. "Sorry!" I said. "No no! It was my fault! I'm DahiveVanityFanGirl!That's my code name for this school of course!" She said happily. I felt confused. "You need a code name?" I asked. She tugged me over to a desk where I said my code name. I decided on MapleBerry<3. "So Maple.. I think me and you are roommates! Along with others of course!" DVFG said."LEGGO!" I screamed and she laughed. She showed me to our room which was this http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_6DJsJUz9bmQ/TFpbOsARvdI/AAAAAAAAAjQ/k-A-OEuQEuM/s1600/dormroom2.jpg (The names on top are DahiveVanityFanGirl and MapleBerry<3) "WOW!" I said happily. "This is only half of it! We have a few more roomma-" Before she could finish more roommates burst into the door including my brother, Evolution Master. They all introduced themselves and they were Hylia, PokeZone, TheTrainerExpert,X, Will, Superdill, AnimeFreak,and Mr.Snap.They all found somewhere to sleep and we collapsed on our beds.I closed my eyes slowly drifting off again.

What did you guys think of the first chapter?

Nice description of the school Maple, and it seems like you were pretty creative with the first chapter. Keep the creative juices up, and let's hope to see more action in the next story. Good thing you included most people here (but include more as you go so you don't leave anyone out).

I just recommend separating the story into paragraphs. That way, the story would be less "crammed" to the eyes.

Chapter 2- The first day
I woke up and checked my phone. It was 2:00pm! I never slept in this late!We had to go to dinner with the mentors around 6pm.I needed to make a good impression! I glanced at the others who were still asleep.

I went to the bathroom, showered, brushed and changed into a dress that Gerard Von Vanity (DVFG's new codename) told me to wear. http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=67705499 I got out of the bathroom and checked my phone. It was 3:00pm. Wow did I really take that long? The others were awake. "Hello! I am RaikouFan!" A boy told me happily. I shook his hand and introduced myself. "I'm Giratina720!" Another boy introduced himself. I again shook his hand and introduced myself.

GVV came out of the bathroom dressed in this- http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=67709423 I could tell that she was happy to keep the outfit awesome and sophisticated at the same time. Hylia went inside the bathroom and came out looking like this -http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=67711269 I liked that she kept everything blue.

It was 4:30pm. "We only have half an hour left!" GVV exclaimed. My eyebrows knit in confusion. "Why? I thought we had to be there at 6." I asked. "No we gotta leave at 5- it takes a hour to get there!" "Oh!" I said. The school and buildings related to the school was HUGE so of course the mentors would live far away! GVV and Hylia were chatting and I joined in occasionally and I was charge playing my phone. Just as I failed at Temple Run, the door burst open and the boys stood there."Time to go!" They chorused in unison. We quickly got up and went to the limo that me and EM arrived in yesterday.After what seemed like hours, we arrived. We walked out of the limo to this house- http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-RV5tE7jwLrI/ULlb1W_G0gI/AAAAAAAADw0/clWjR22mQ3M/s1600/luxury-mansions-in-london-1.jpg We were quickly escorted inside and we ate our dinner. Well technically breakfast lunch and dinner. Then, a few people, who I guessed were the mentors started chatting. "I love your dress!" A tall blonde lady said smiling at me. "Thank you!" I responded and smiled at her. We were assigned mentors and found out that the girls share one room and the boys in another.

The future rooms for us was being worked on. Luckily for us, we got Jenny the nice lady. We had to go back to our rooms. We all said goodbye and the limo ride felt like a couple of minutes. We got into our rooms and I walked into the bathroom and changed into my PJs. I jumped into my bed and fell into a dreamless sleep.

This fanfic is awesome, keep on making more chapters!

Nice, there were some grammar errors. But the story in overall is nice. Keep it up!~

AWESOMENESS! I like it! Keep up the GREAT work!

Thanks guys!

Chapter 3- New Rooms!!!
I blinked a few times and rubbed my eyes with my fists. I woke up! Yay! Today was the day where we get our new room! I went to the bathroom and brushed. I shook GVV and Hylia awake. They stumbled into the bathroom. I noticed a note on our door. It said: Hi girls! You're gonna have 2 more roommates and you have to move into your own house! You get to decorate it! Meet me at the Wreck It Ralph arcade machine before 12! Bye! - Jenny.

"New roommates!" We all exclaimed happily. I quickly got dressed into http://www.polyvore.com/extra_stuff/set?id=62776480
GVV and Hylia were dressed in a simple shirt and a pair or jeans.We quickly raced downstairs to the arcade machines and spotted the Wreck it Ralph one.We ran up to it. "Hi! I'm Oshawottluv49!" "I'm Ospreyeagle!" They said. We smiled and introduced ourselves."Let's go to the house girls!" Jenny said. We got in her van and drove to this beautiful house-http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_lcj4C0D3Bxc/R8fjY31DMzI/AAAAAAAAA6c/UnXDvGr8oPU/s800/My+Perfect+House.jpg

"You get to upgrade later." Jenny explained. "Pick out your rooms!" We raced inside the house and I chose this room-
TO BE CONTINUED

Nice work Maple! Keep it up. Grammar is improving too. XD

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I jumped on the bed and sunk into it. It was perfect! Ospreyeagle walked into my room. "Hi!" I said. "Hiya!"She said back smiling. "By the way, you can call me Michelle." She said smiling once again. "Okay!" I replied. "By the way, we have to go out somewhere. Where, I have no idea but we have to dress casual and fancy." She said while walking out of the room. I sighed.People don't relax much round here. Oh well. I got up and took a shower. I brushed and changed into this- http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=69139586
I walked into the living room to see all the girls dressed in this-http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=69144217 .
"Let's go girls!" Jenny called out. "Where?" I asked her. "Somewhere!" She exclaimed. We followed her out to the limo. In 10 minutes, we were at a mansion- http://www.blogcdn.com/www.luxist.com/media/2009/03/fleurdelys.jpg
We walked inside to see the boys looking uncomfortable.My eyes shifted to a stern looking man.We all sat down."ALL OF YOU KIDS ARE OUT OF THIS SCHOOL!" He screamed. My eyes grew wide. I looked around to make sure that this wasn't a prank. It wasn't. "Why?" We all asked."We don't have enough space here!" He screamed.

We all looked at each other. The man started shaking. I was confused. Does this dude have issues? He burst out laughing. So did all the mentors. "I'm just kidding!" He said in between laughs. We laughed along. It was time to go home. We went into the limo and ran inside our house. "MOVIE NIGHT!" Jenny screamed as we ran upstairs to change. I threw this http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=69610463 on and ran down stairs. I ran into this room- http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m78g7iC5qN1ryr7qco1_500.jpg and jumped on the bed. Everyone else came shortly and I started laughing. They were wearing the same pajamas! We laughed and I put in Toy Story.
"Why can't we watch something else??" GVV whined. "Shh!" I shushed her."It's starting!" After that, we ended up watching the whole Toy Story trioligy and also Wreck It Ralph. I fell into a dreamless sleep.
I woke up suddenly. "Are they sleeping?" I heard a deep voice say.
I knew that voice like the back of my hand! It was...................................................

WHO?? Lol guess!

Lol Pixar movies.

Nice job Maple.