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    Short story: Describing the graveyard (Gothic)

    Mudkip
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    Post by Mudkip Wed May 08, 2013 4:27 pm

    Hell guys, this is what I wrote for my English theme, Gothic.

    What I can see is a gravestone breathing slowly saying "Samua..." quietly and old. The gravestone feels icy and dark as a bat. The tree is wheezing and coughing heavily and he is crying for help. The tall tree is as weak as a paper which can be ripped. The mazy magnificent mansion is staring down at everything below him with a frightening expression because he is the leader of the grave. Some call him grotesque because of his monstrous look. The pale moon is bright yet sinister because she provides light however, the pallid moon is working for the brute mansion. The monotonous moon breathes menace.

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    Post by Evolution Master Wed May 08, 2013 4:28 pm

    Really great work Mudkip! Smile

    I see you wrote this piece with a lot of creativity and from the use of metaphors to similes, it's definitely a lot deeper than it looks and is satisfactory to read. Keep up the great work! Smile

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